So many blind accusations
Misguided at fate
As a discarded past
derived of my hate
Drives forth the meaning of
Bliss into barren waters
Echoing in ripples
Screaming the pain
Of a pill in a glass
Swallow all hope for your family
In more and more trances
we're led by the heart
as insecure lovers
we're broken apart
While a young mother shivers
at the sight of disease
Blind spots of the mind
Met only by the
spots in the mirror
Sharing death with a false lover
A false love stikes me
In remembrance of lust
As a true goddess grows
to be shattered to dust
Embracing the painting
To drift in the breeze
ink dripping
like blood
Seeping through white linen
Stains matched only by tears on the pillow
Not left to do
but injest our pride
With bottles of pleasure
We're hollow inside
So at glance of shadows
we whimper away
Never to surrender
To bright winter's day
When our prison seems no more than a dream
We feel for our lust
In the reveries we play
As we lose all our sense
In the gutters we lay















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this creates so many images in my head, damnit i\'ve missed your writing...i hope you are able to more.
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I wanted to make this one reflect the point in my life that inspired it
Thx for actually giving some criticism
i love articulation in poetry, after all we can only use words and its a breath of fresh air to see someone actually using the language
great job.. now.. i only got 49 other poemys of yours to catch up on *rubs hands together* hehehe
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Some men see things as they are and say "why?"... I dream of things that never were and say "why not?"
"In more and more trances
we're led by the heart
as insecure lovers
we're broken apart"
and the sentence "As a true goddess grows to be shattered to dust" .. very very beautiful way of saying it
great poem!
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